Oh my god that was slow!
And what was the point! Her face, his face, her face, his face, just make something happen!! Good lord, I almost fell asleep waiting for something, ANYTHING interesting to happen. It was hard to fallow, incredibly slow, and for crying outloud, couldn't you at least get all the white off of the violin? Or maybe just draw it? The art was not bad, but my god make a faster paced story next time! One with a point!